silent in your car
I wrote my name on the roof cushion of your car
with my finger,
as if to leave a piece of me behind.
I hoped that you would see it someday
but it faded,
nearly as quick as I wrote it.
A negative answer followed by a scream. Then it was gone.
5 Comments:
We need to sit down and have a good chat my good friend. It's been to long clouded by other people and other agendas. Come, sit, talk, eat sometime ok?
-Amber
Food is good.
...what she said.
what they both said. I'll BUY even... I really will.
ditto. Coming back to town soon.
I like how you used the word "quick" rather than "quickly". I'd like to hear what was "gone". The writing, the answer or the scream? Good stuff my friend, keep at it!
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