10/19/2005

Transaction

You enslave me Old Man, my enjambed
thoughts dictated by your subtle control
of my brain;
Stop!

Did you see it?

is flawed. Language
is flawed. Without these words

of you.

1 Comments:

Blogger Todd said...

your enjambment techniques
are awesome. Quit your
day job Noah. I mean,
it. :
)

11:26 PM  

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